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You lied
Telling I was the only one
Now I cry
Watching you run

My shadow feels alone
Now that your gone
I have been thrown
Just something you could feed on

Now I sit here
Writing about you
Hoping you disappear
Hopefully I’ll come through

You don’t deserve a rhyme scheme
You don’t deserve beautiful pieces of art
You don’t deserve to be happy
You don’t deserve to move on
You deserve to die

Yes I sound cruel
Yes I sound like a bitch
I just wished that
You were here again

Hugging me
Kissing me
And telling me
I’m the only one
:bulletblack: No one deserves to be abandoned and hurt... it just happens in life...
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iloverikuandsora Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This reminds me of some one who hurt me and reading your poem makes me feel better knowing I'm not alone
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lilcutestarz Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2013  Student General Artist
no one is ever alone on anything. Its just hard to speak out to the fact it happened to us... I remember staring in the mirror and i was like..."was tht a dream or did it really happen?"
Poetry is just part of what i do to keep my mind off him...
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iloverikuandsora Featured By Owner May 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I hear you but is it wrong I've come to hate him
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lilcutestarz Featured By Owner May 12, 2013  Student General Artist
no its not
(sent you a note)
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chancerox Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
stunning and oh so true.
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lilcutestarz Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2013  Student General Artist
Tried to make it as true as possible ^^
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Samonmis Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
LOVE.! :wow:
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lilcutestarz Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2013  Student General Artist
:giggle: thank you ^^
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Samonmis Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Your welcome.! :D
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